Impossible poem?
Tell me the truth in him. Impossible that I love more than anything I want as a brother I wished every day for her and I to be together …… It is impossible is impossible! IMPOSSIBLE FOR YOUR CARE, WHY BE BROKEN AGAAAAAAIN? Immmmmmmmpossssssibbble! Why I can not stop worrying about it? There are many however, its only at the very moment that I love her more than ……… THEEEEEM ALL! Why is it impossible NOT SO easygoing? NO …….. NOBODY but his friends cousin? No, and I'll tell you why: Because I've survived breaks his past, deaths, more than ever expected. SHES always there for me And I am there for HER ND HER ALONE! But then why ….. …. Why continue it? Because of love. Do you really love her? YEEEEESSSS ?!?!?!?! No one can tell, NO ONE CANNOT Guess how much! Impossible ?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Impossible Impossible
, Okay First of all, that not a poem. This is a list of phrases. are some questions and some are prayers. has potential to be a question as Langston Hughes poem poem, "a dream deferred." Definitely you need to work on the soacing so it has more emotion and more accumulation and momentum in the poem, otherwise it is not differeent reading an essay. as the Langston Hughes poem, make every question a new line. remember, the whole poem must be the questions. Definitely the end is strong. providing a strong dose of the emotion that you want to give to readers. i love'?!?!?' in the last line. except the last three lines, ask questions rest. that what a poem is a question about. right poem seems very boring, repetitive and disorganized. seems like you're just rambling. can not really your point of view. so trying to do a poetry concerned. each line is a question. and then the three lines at the end, keep it.